Once Upon a Dream - TOC

One, two, three... [Linked Image]

See, isn't First Kiss looking so much better than this first draft now? Aren't you wishing you hadn't asked me to piece together these cutting room floor parts to make a coherent story? wink

That first scene of Superman delivering the note to Lois, reminded me a bit too much of my story Just a Little Note. And those adaptations of the WoS scenes seemed a bit... well, bad.

This WAFFy scene at the end wasn't too bad, except Clark wasn't very Clarkish in his behavior. Now, you know why all these scenes ended up not making it to the final story.

Tomorrow I'll post my "Over the Top" Epilogue -- which technically ISN'T a cutting room floor scene. I just figured if I was going to make a groan-worthy story, I better add in one of my famous (infamous) twist Epilogues. evil

As always, comments accepted below.

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"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.