Lynn That's good - and the ending is better. At least, I think it is.
Jackie Yeah, poor Clark.
Mouserocks Clark should have just asked her.
He *tried* to!
Amber You just wanted us all to feel like Lois, didn't you?!
Actually, I just wanted to write a bit of silliness
Laura Thanks!
bellarase Did you have a real life inspiration for his character?
No. I can't remember exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this originally, but the coffee boy seems to be pretty much the exact opposite of Clark, so perhaps I was going for contrast.
DC I've never seen an author write Clark SO tuned to Lois that he knows her wardrobe based on her footsteps. Nice!
He's been obsessing - even for him!
Huh. Not a bad idea. Until Lois gets mad at Superman.
But Superman isn't trying to ask Lois out, so that's OK
Joan I'll try to keep the wait short. RL has been busy lately.
DW Glad you enjoyed it
Thanks for the FDK, everyone.
Corrina.
