Originally posted by Mouserocks:
Wow! Normally, I don't go for fics that revolve around songs, or skip over that bit... but wow! It was so beautiful (the lyrics and the story)! And so very fitting! I liked the mood of this piece very much. Clark's run through on how he feels everything his life(lives) has surmounted to seemed both accurate and well expressed. The last line, especially, was perfect. Excellent job! Oddly enough, Mouse, I also usually don't go for fics that revolve around songs. But after listening to my "Beethoven's Last Night" cd for the nine bilionth time, I was just so struck by how well the lyrics to this one could match Clark.
Glad you enjoyed this fic. It was one of the hardest ones that I've ever written (in maintaining a link to the lyrics while keeping Clark totally in character). But it was one of the most rewarding because of the challenge.
I'm glad that the last line worked for you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!