Great job, Annie. I haven't read the other two prequel stories to this, but still you've managed to show me the emotions so well that I'm picking up where these two are in their new relationship perfectly. And your references to their time spent in Washington DC is certainly teasing me to go read the other stories.
I like how Clark presented his past to Lois as a buildup for the real confession. Kind of easing her into it in hopes that it will make the truth easier to swallow. That he didn't just present it as "I'm Superman" but that there was a history involved. And like others, my favorite line has to be the "I'm not a NASA experiment. I'm Kryptonian." I think this is destined to become a classic.
I'm looking forward to the rest. Really enjoying this.
Lynn
