WOW, QueenOfAces,
What a great ending to a perfect story. I've been waiting for it for a while.
I loved how jealous Lois was in this story. In my opinion, the show didn't really explore this emotion as much as they could have (and should have). In the show, it seemed that, with few exceptions, Clark was the one always trying to get Lois to pay attention to him, always him being the one thinking he's going to lose her for one reason or another. So I loved how you turned the table on her this time. Fantastic job!
I'm certainly waiting for an epilogue as well.
P.S. I agree with Mozartmaid. I also love your tagline. Every time I read it, I keep laughing and thinking how true it is. I also mentioned it to a roommate of mine, referencing you and this site.
