Nice done!
For the first half of it I was sort of wondering which Friends episode you'd been watching. I was mentally going through all the weddings. Hadn't actually though this was the way you were going... until I got this far, that is:
“You must have had him in college,” the man continued. “You look great!”
He sauntered off, ice clinking in his glass, and didn’t catch Lois’ reaction.
Clark, on the other hand, had never seen his partner so stunned.
“Lois?” he said after a minute. “Are you okay?”
Her voice was a low hiss. “His … mother?”
From then on, I could see the end coming. I hope though, that you also show us some of what happened from Clark's comment about Lois being beautiful to the morning after.
Looking forward to more!
