A fun read. I liked that you didn't take the easy, WAFFy way out; at this point in canon, Lois was close to realizing that she loved Clark in a non-sibling sort of way, but she wasn't quite there yet. Your paraphrasing of her canonical profession of sisterly love toward him was just right. Of course, in my mental continuation of the story, she will realize her true feelings before too terribly long...
Joy,
Lynn
