BRILLIANT! ALL THE LOSE ENDS WERE TIED UP NICELY.
Oops my cap lock was on. Sorry! Anyway, I loved the way you explained the whole why Deter did what he did. I think that made sense that it was a power trip for him. I also loved the whole intimate feet thing. And Clark does have nice feet, for feet that is. Though I think a little toe nibbling would have been warranted here<g>
The wedding was perfect. The conversation with Henderson, great! The Franklin Stern thing genius!
I give you a 10 out of 10. (of course had this been in the nfic folder, it would have gotten an 11<g>)I loved this story all around and I am sorry to see it over. Keep writing! Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"