Well, folks. That's it. That's all. Hope you enjoyed it.

I'd also like to take this opportunity to thank all of you for your input. You've helped make this story better.

LOL!!! I remember the consummation discussion from No Place Like Home.

LOVED that the cabin belonged to the Sterns! And who knew Vader had a sense of humor .

Very nice wrap up!

Carol

Oh, you're so delightfully evil! Just can't wrap up a story without including HG Wells and the mystery disease. I love it!

Great epilogue, and Jimmy catching the bouquet was a very funny touch!

Thank you for writing another wonderful story! I really enjoyed the ride.
JD

H.G.Wells??? H.G.Wells!!!!

Aaaarggghhh!!!!!

Thanks for a fun, scary, romantic and somewhat evil ride, ML!

Ann

A wonderfully waffy ending and with the possible kidnapping charges nicely taken care of. I enjoyed this fic immensely... thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

Cheers
Elizabeth

Great fic!

I am delightfully surprised with the way in which you chose to wrap things up - and the ending was pure brilliance

Yes, thanks for writing such a great (and at certain moments, evil) story

BRILLIANT! ALL THE LOSE ENDS WERE TIED UP NICELY.
Oops my cap lock was on. Sorry! Anyway, I loved the way you explained the whole why Deter did what he did. I think that made sense that it was a power trip for him. I also loved the whole intimate feet thing. And Clark does have nice feet, for feet that is. Though I think a little toe nibbling would have been warranted here<g>
The wedding was perfect. The conversation with Henderson, great! The Franklin Stern thing genius!
I give you a 10 out of 10. (of course had this been in the nfic folder, it would have gotten an 11<g>)I loved this story all around and I am sorry to see it over. Keep writing! Laura

Oh, you evil evil woman, leaving them with the curse! I loved how you wrapped everything up, with both the wedding and the cabin.

That was a NASTY thing to do to them - I approve!

What a fabulous ending!

The wedding was great! I loved how you brought in all of the characters, especially Star.

And a profound thank you for dealing with Deter. I think I'll just insert a copy of your story in my DVD case right after Forget Me Not.

Amber

Hey, wait a moment, ML! What happened to my more perfect ending????

carol

Nope. That was already the way I had ended it. After all that mushyness in the proceeding paragraphs, I figured... what the heck. End with the 'Aaaaaaaaaaa!' moment. On the other hand, given the way I'd ended it, I found myself laughing when you mentioned Tempus.

As a former divorce lawyer, that's pretty much my philosophy. (Trust me when I say, criminal law is much less dirty)

I've never heard that about the Old Testament and would be very curious to see chapter and verse. On the other hand, I was pretty sure that it was common knowledge (or at least theory) these days that there was a connection between the two - which is why I have Lois burst out laughing. (And that is about all I will say about that without taking this discussion over to the nfic boards )

Hey, anytime you want to yell at me that my story is brilliant, feel free. I could use more of that type of yelling.

Well, I might have left you with the curse, but at least I cut out the stupid wedding destroyer.

Carol, how many times do I have to tell you: Lois isn't going to dump Clark and run off with Henderson. And no, a three way is out of the question, too!

ML

but ML, you led me to believe .... and the 3 way would have been so nice.

Okay fine. To your version, simply add the following:

There. Does that end things better for you? (Just don't read the version that's going to the archives and you'll be fine )

ML

/mentally replaces feet with *censored*/ Oh boy, this is dirty

Thank-you, ML. After all - what every woman knows: always good to have a back-up plan.

c.

I think there has been a mis-understanding here. Just because ML has completed this particular story doesn't mean she gets out of posting some new story part every other day.

Am I right?

Tank (who is looking forward to 'what's next')

Yep. That was a conscious decision. I didn't want to hide it. I wanted people to say... "Hey, they are going to get married... I hope." Build the anticipation, but not know for certain until a couple pages further in.

Nope. Or at least, I don't think so. After I post a story, I sort of forget the details of the story. After all, you're only as good as your next story... Either that, or my memory is starting to go on me. Not sure which it is. Probably the latter



Sorry. I seem to have already missed the deadline.

I am working on an idea for another story, though. Gerry told me, however, that I'm not allowed to use kryptonite in this one. How am I supposed to write a story with one hand tied behind my back like that.

Anyway, I'm currently watching the gold/silver curling game: Canada v. Sweden. It's a tight game, got me on the edge of my seat.

ML

Wow!!! I absolutely loved this story (like all your stories.. ).

I've always wanted to see more interaction between an amnesiac Lois and a desperate Clark during that arc, and this story more than made up for it.

And the ending was classic.

I've been away for a while (lost in RL), and this was a superb celebrate-my-return story,