It's great to see another one of your fics. I loved what I've read from you.
This is a great premise - and I always like different takes of this non-wedding arc. Although the idea of this machine and Lois reliving all those memories was nice - I guess there could be other ways to solve the problem. I'm really curious how Lois is going to react when she finally wakes up. And how great to see that Clark is not standing there, watching her walk out on him *again*.
This is a great start. I hope you're coming back with more soon.
