Hello HappyGirl,
I have followed your story since the first parts and it's amazing ! I love it !
This Clark is different but I like the way he acts and how he feels about his character "writer Clark Kent" and the superhero Superman ! He has some difficulties to become again, just Clark ! He is more self-confident but at the same time, he has some insecurities because of his origins.
The relationship which has begun between Lois & "Caleb" is fascinating !
I am not good to write feedbacks, so more clearly, I am eager to read the next parts !
Thank you for this original "pilot".
Have a nice week.
Friendly, Annalina.
