"He was my first," she finally said, rushing through the statement.
Nononononnonononononononononono nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I wanted to keep dating and he gave me an ultimatum. Said that was fine and he was okay with me turning him down, but if I wasn't going to sleep with him then obviously this relationship wasn't going anywhere and maybe we'd both best move on.
Erm... What? Bad, Dan. Bad. Can he get beaten up a bit by Trask. Just a little instead of Clark? Please? Pretty please?
/takes a deep breath/
Okay. The prose was good. The rest... Well, suffice to say, I feel a bit