This was a great beginning! You had me going at the beginning - I figured it was Lois in the sandbox at first, then thought it might be Rachel when she called for Lana, and then it turns out it was Lois. Which of course begs the question of how the Lanes ended up in Smallville...
Like some others have mentioned, fluffy chapters from you make me nervous, knowing that the angst is sure to follow!
I'm hooked already...can't wait to see where this is going!
Amber
