I, too, thought that the title was going to be something else, which actually made me not want to read it.
Lois had three rules and she broke all three of them. I wasn't particularly interested in another rehash of those rules.
However, I didn't notice that it was a new author to the boards. If I had I might have given it a try on that alone.
It was Elisabeth that convinced me to read it. She is my wife and she has almost never lead me wrong on a story.
This was a wonderful story that gave us a different POV on Clark and was a wonderfully original aspect of character development. I can't believe that no one has ever done anything with the woman that saw Clark stop the bus!
The quality of the writing was wonderful and very on par with the submissions to this board. Please send this on to LabRat for archiving in our archive
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And thank you for listening to Dandello and posting here. I hope you have found a new home with us.
James
