You sure didn't waste any time getting this part rolling:
Lois raised a brow. “It doesn’t matter?”
Rachel and CJ ignored her for a few moments as they silently comforted each other. Finally, CJ stepped away from his wife, “Lois, I don’t have to justify myself to you. You’re my brother’s girlfriend...”
Lois, meet CJ's temper.
And speaking of tempers...
“I went to face Luthor... and I got him to back down.”
The others stared at Clark in shock.
CJ recovered first and shook his head. “I always knew you would be dangerous if you ever lost your temper, Cal...”
I'm definitely getting the feeling that your Clark has more... um... "spherical male reproductive organs"
than the standard "show" Clark.
I liked your handling of CJ. I was convinced that he was out of the hero business.
But the Lucy AND Jimmy revelation.
My only complaint is that you aren't writing fast enough. I want more faster!
Bob
