FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 20 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Wednesday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep.

TOC | Part 20

Preview:

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Cat sauntered over and ran a hand over Clark’s shoulders before whispering in his ear, “Morning, Hot Cakes...”

Blame Michael for the preview!

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He took a deep breath. “I was stupid, Rach...”

“True... but it was very *human* of you.”

Talk about genetic defects

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Clark stiffened suddenly, hearing several sirens. <CJ?>

<Tied... Why does Lucy keep staring at me?>
*SNORT*

Clark looked at Lois. “My turn...” he smiled at Jimmy and rushed for the stairs. <She walked in on Lois and me kissing last night...>

<And that is special how?>
Yeah, about that...

<I was in my Suit...>

<Oh... Well, that... Clark! You have to be more careful!>
Yep

<Jimmy was there, too...>

<You’re kidding?!>

<Nope... Sorry, Jay...>
LOL

Clark grinned at his brother’s curses rang in his head as he took to the air.
Now, now, now… Do you need another mouth wash, courtesy of Martha Kent?

Michael /ducking because of preview/

Great chapter! Keep it coming!

@Michael: Ducking doesn't help against these guys...

You sure didn't waste any time getting this part rolling:

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Lois raised a brow. “It doesn’t matter?”

Rachel and CJ ignored her for a few moments as they silently comforted each other. Finally, CJ stepped away from his wife, “Lois, I don’t have to justify myself to you. You’re my brother’s girlfriend...”

Lois, meet CJ's temper.

And speaking of tempers...

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“I went to face Luthor... and I got him to back down.”

The others stared at Clark in shock.

CJ recovered first and shook his head. “I always knew you would be dangerous if you ever lost your temper, Cal...”

I'm definitely getting the feeling that your Clark has more... um... "spherical male reproductive organs"

than the standard "show" Clark.

I liked your handling of CJ. I was convinced that he was out of the hero business.

But the Lucy AND Jimmy revelation.

My only complaint is that you aren't writing fast enough. I want more faster!

Bob

Michael: lol @ you for pasting from your beta file =P

Lara: Glad you liked it... and the original preview had more context than that but Michael suggested I cut it off...

Bob: Yes, well, Lois was being herself... nosy and pushy, ~.^ I'm also glad that I made CJ's decision plausible. And glad I caught people by surprise, hehe.

And Bob, 'guts' is safe too =P