Like Maria, I couldn't help wondering if Seth is now doomed.
I really like the way you've given Denzler a reason, no matter how twisted, for his assassinations. You really did a good job of fleshing out the character by emphasizing his paranoia on Gendell's behalf. Do we get to find out just why Denzler is so obsessively loyal and protective? Does he just get a really, really big retainer?
Is Lois' worry here from the ep? Because it didn't sound like much of a worry to me. Actually, it sounded like someone desperately trying to dredge up something to worry about, and that's just not Lois' personality. Of course, if it is from the ep, never mind.
More soon, okay?
Hazel
