Okay, your handling of the Deter situation was absolutely brilliant. I was laughing so hard that I was almost in tears. "I love only you!" *slap*

It was perrrfect. And the fact that justice got served as well was a much welcomed added boon. What he was doing and attempting to do to was complete violation.

I'm glad we got to talk about Vickie in this part as well. I see her as a tie to their 'real' reality and the fear that they could lose that is what makes things urgent for them.

I'm also glad that Lois believed Clark about the New Krypton (and not just because it led to nookie... but maybe mostly, lol). She didn't get to see Zara or anything, but she accepted his story. So she *trusts* him... she just doesn't trust him. Or something like that.

Thank you for the story, you are giving me a much appreciated tool for distraction and procrastination from coursework.

~Sonia


October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark
"Elastigirl? You married Elastigirl? (sees the kids) And got bizzay!" -- Syndrome, The Incredibles