I thought having the proposal right at the beginning was a great start!!
Jim is awesome - its strange yet so natural to think of him as the editor. Is he married? does he have kids?
I think ellie seems really cute. Id like to find out more about her although i don't think I would like her to get with Jay. Maybe with Jimmy's son?
Angst is always nice (well terrible but u know) but please please don't have Jon be naughty with Amanda.
Anyway, i am completely hooked to this story now and I don't usualy like 1st person stories.
Cheers and happy writing
Em
Em
