Chris,
You bet I (and I'm sure others) have comments!
This was a great part. It had both romance from both Lois' and CJ's POV as well as a some suspense and you've closed with another
And how cute is this:
CJ had graduated quickly from the red-and-white "partnership" roses of their first evening together to all red ones. He didn't need to tell her anything about the depth of his feelings because the flowers spoke of them eloquently enough, but he did so, anyway. CJ, Lois was discovering, was a true romantic, with the soul of a poet. It was a pity, she thought, that he'd gone into law. He would have made a terrific romance writer.
I'll leave a few others for other ppl to quote.
Can we please have part 29
NOW?
Avia
