Comments: An Extraordinary Man II (28/31) - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Wow... getting towards the end now...

Comments, anyone?

Chris

Chris,
You bet I (and I'm sure others) have comments!
This was a great part. It had both romance from both Lois' and CJ's POV as well as a some suspense and you've closed with another

And how cute is this:

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CJ had graduated quickly from the red-and-white "partnership" roses of their first evening together to all red ones. He didn't need to tell her anything about the depth of his feelings because the flowers spoke of them eloquently enough, but he did so, anyway. CJ, Lois was discovering, was a true romantic, with the soul of a poet. It was a pity, she thought, that he'd gone into law. He would have made a terrific romance writer.

I'll leave a few others for other ppl to quote.

Can we please have part 29 NOW?

Avia

Ahhhhhh....!

Okay, right now, I'd be glad to see CJ get his powers back. Your Luthor is scary.

Post more, NOW!

PJ

Yikes!! I'm scared too

!!

I bet CJ will be missing those powers pretty quickly!

Post more SOON!!

~Liz

Aaaaack!!!

Vicki

Me too! Post now!

Nan

Hi,

Krissie get back here!

Great piece.

Good instalment. As others have said you present a nice diversity of story here. We get a sampling of the feelings Lois and Clark have for each other then it gets contrasted by the menace of Luthor.
And we know what he wants.

Lot's of potential here. Good cliffhanger, but let's investigate what we have.

Lois, at Luthor's mercy. Clark is coming but he has no powers. Luthor has a gun. Any bets as to who winds up dead?

Tank (who thinks that at least one of our infatuated duo needs to sacrifice him/herself for the other)

Ohmygoodness! I can't believe you did that! My heart is in my throat and the blood has left my legs.

There may be a mini typo when you wrote: Lois Land and CJ Kent: The Hottest Team in Town.

More please! Soon!
gerry

Chris

An excellent part!

Yikes, what a place to stop!

Luthor is so evil.

Please post the next part ASAP!

Tricia

Avia: thank you! Glad you liked this. So, uh, you want to know what happens next, do you? I'll think about it...

Pam:

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Okay, right now, I'd be glad to see CJ get his powers back.

You would, would you? H'm. I'm delighted to hear that you think Luthor is scary. He's supposed to be.

You want more?

Liz: another scared person! Yay!!! I'm on a roll.

Vicki:

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Why do I find myself hoping that the Clark from our universe would show up in this one, even just for moral support?? Crazy, I know.

Yep, very crazy. As for your other suggestion... Who knows (besides the author, that is!)?

Delighted that this part met with your approval.

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Yeah, count me in with everyone else who said "post part 29 NOW!"

Nan:

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Me too! Post now!

Gosh, you guys are impatient!

Maria: your posts always make me smile... even if I made you scowl this time around.

Tank:

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Lois, at Luthor's mercy. Clark is coming but he has no powers. Luthor has a gun. Any bets as to who winds up dead?

Now, why on earth would you think that anyone was going to end up dead?

Thanks for the positive vibes here.

Gerry: thanks! Just the effect I was going for! (Actually, better than the one I was aiming for.) Thanks also for pointing out the typo. It has now been corrected on my 'master' copy.

Tricia: thank you... and another vote for a rapid follow up.

Oh, okay then...

Chris