Well, now that Ann has checked in with her brief feedback (for which she has absolutely no time to post), I'd like to echo everything she said (especially about the conceivable disasters and inconceivable means! rotflol ) and add my two cents worth.

Loved it! Funny all the way through even when the doctor asked Lois if she'd had any other sexual partners. As if Lois Lane-Kent would ever cheat on her husband!

Okay, when's the next excellent piece? You have to feed us now that you've teased us so unmercifully.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing