YAHHH!

You broke Enza!

At least you let her live. And thank you! We finally, FINALLY have the real and valid and true and final confirmation that Rae Et is dead. Lok Sim is wounded but will be okay, Zara is alive, though injured, her brother is alive, Ching is handling things most impressively, Clark is in very serious condition (and Talan may be in worse condition), and Lois is processing the latter stages of her grief for Clark.

And Lois's story may be the most touching of all. Her life has hit a plateau, where the folks on New Krypton are passing through a deep valley of pain and unrest. I hope Zara's injuries don't suddenly get more threatening (we all know how dangerous concussions can be).

All in all, a very gripping beginning. Thank you for coming back with it so quickly. I hope we won't have to hunt you down and aim pointy things at you to make you keep the chapters flowing.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing