Delightful. Well done. I like that younger Lois is creating problems.

Quote
Tell him everything
no, no, no. At this point she has warned him about Luthor. Now enlist him to warn Superman.

She does not know he will become Superman. But she knows things about Superman that Clark does not know.

Lois needs to brush aside his questions and tell Clark her main mission. To save Superman from Lex Luthor so he can stop Nightfall and save the Earth.

She can tell Clark about a flying man, named "Kal El", who will arrive in a few years from a planet called Krypton.

She needs to tell him it is not important that he believe her now but that he remember so he can save Superman in the future.

Then have her blank out and replaced by young Lois who does not know him. Clark can tell by her heartbeat that both versions of Lois are telling him the truth.

Not knowing Clark is Superman will give her words added weight!


Framework4