I usually wait til the story's further developed to review, but I have to say, I LOVE THIS PREMISE!! LOVE IT! It's a fantastic story too. And am following it avidly. Being a Buddhist, I've grown up with tales of reincarnation and debates of that nature and always found it fascinating. thumbsup thumbsup clap
I can't help but wonder, do they suspect that it's them reborn? And how come Sam and Ellen can't see the resemblance to their daughter in little Lois? Won't they be suspicous that Jim's illegitimate child looks so much like Lucy?
Great part, and please keep on writing!
*Hands on hips*
And why is this thread so shamefully neglected, eh? C'mon, FoLCs! Make some noise!

“Is he dead, Lois?”

“No! But I was really mad and I wanted to kick him between the legs and pull his nose off and put out his eyes with a freshly sharpened pencil and disembowel him with a dull letter opener and strangle him with his own intestines but I stopped myself just in time!”
- Further Down The Road by Terry Leatherwood.