I'm at work right now so I don't have time to read the new section.
However, I just wanted to say how thrilled I am that you are posting again Jenni! I have been reading and enjoying this story from the beginning. Once I have read the new part I will be back with proper comments.
-Em
"But my experience is that as soon as people are old enough to know better, they don't know anything at all."
-Oscar Wilde, "Lady Windermere's Fan"
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