Annie,

Grr, since all of my comments got deleted (probably by my own stupidity somehow), this is going to be really short.

I love this story smile . I think you did an excellent job portraying the absolute evilness of Lana... okay maybe not absolute evilness, but I really don't like her smile .

I loved the part about Lana being fake. She IS so fake! I can't stand her! Oh yeah black roots! Yes!

I'm so glad that you finished this in time!!!

Happy Birthday, Sarah!!

- Alicia smile1

Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve