poetry, pure poetry
you write so beautifully....The only thing that would spoil your story for me is a long wait for the next instalments....good luck and keep it up
your ending is great, i loved the ubrupt departure.... kindof gives me the impression of looking at some exquisite crystal ornament, with your brilliant description of each facet in each sentence, only to have it drop and shatter on the floor....
welcome back to the world of fandom by the way,
