ooo. nice. both a-plot and b-plot.

the way they miss each other is very sweet. smile

looks like they're getting some nice leads, too. great idea having lois look for what's not there. cool.

this thing with mayson and rosemary is interesting. mayson seems to be pretty worried. i wonder where that will go.

oh, and btw, i really like the bit with cj using the superman voice in court. subtle but effective. nicely done.

then, at the end...

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Thinking about Lois gave him confidence. Odd, he thought, how he could draw strength simply from the thought of her.
very nice touch.

great job, chris. looking forward to part 15. smile

Paul


When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.