Thanks, Terry! I appreciate the feedback, and for once, I was actually thinking the exact same things you just said--about the whole New Krypton thing and leverage. I'm thinking Jor-El IS with Lara in this one . . . I just felt that since I'd had him initiate contact with Clark in the last three vignettes that it was Lara's turn.
Actually, I do think that this is one I might continue, since I could put such a specific timeline on it, and I know what it could do to the series continuity and stuff, whereas, with the others, I only had vague ideas of what would happen next if I continued them.
Anyway, I have one more vignette left to write before I make any decisions. I'm also planning on a longer fic, which I've done the planning for, but haven't started to write yet.
Thanks for the great feedback!
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