FDK for part 2:
Mayson had made it crystal clear that while she wanted a deeper relationship with him, she wanted nothing to do with Superman and thought him a menace to society. Would her affection for Clark be enough to not tell the world?
Right??? OMG… what’s she going to do??
“We’re here,” Lois remarked, as if she knew his mind had been elsewhere.
He was grateful for her gentleness this morning. She’d arrived with coffee and hadn’t started the day pressing him for how he was doing. She’d reached out as if to give him a hug but had changed her mind, instead placing her hand on his upper arm, giving a gentle caress, before pulling her hand back.
OMG OMG… all this is SO PERFECT! GAHHH! All the understated stuff!!
Her thumb had been caressing his hand the whole time she spoke, a quiet reassurance to him that she was still there, that he hadn’t screwed everything up. He was grateful for her ability to assess fairly closely what his thoughts had been – that he hadn’t done enough – and comfort him. He reached up with his free hand and gently tucked an errant strand of hair behind her ear, his thumb gently sliding down her jawline as he pulled his hand back. He heard her breath catch as she closed her eyes, her face turning up toward him in expectation. Lowering his head slightly, he captured her lips with his, his hand returning to caress her face.
GAHHH!! So waffy!
And WOW!! GAHHH!! This whole part was just full of amazing with the way you did all the little touches from Lois, the quiet support, and Clark’s emotions… everything came through so well and I have all the FEEEEELS!!! *dies* GAH!!
Can’t wait to find out what happens next!!
Sara
