I love it! Great twist on the eppy, and I looove the way you suddenly launched us into Lois' head when she saw the gun. No joke, the way the general descriptions suddenly focused in on just her thoughts is exactly the way I'm sure she was feeling in that moment: like the whole world suddenly shrank down to that one thing -- the gun.
And Clark's fear was superbly described! I loved that you had him thinking what Lois said in TOGOM. Good stuff! Solid work, my friend, I'm looking forward to Part 4 (and glad that there'll be more than 5 total!)
