Oh wow! Ditto what everyone has already said, Caroline. This is GREAT! And this, especially, *really* got me...
The eyes told the real story, though, and seeing them made her realize that her Clark was no longer within reach, even when he was standing three feet away.
You do such a great job of showing the emotions of these two, showing how torn up they are. You need to make them better. Soon. PLEASE!!!!!!!
Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to beg. What I meant was "it'd be cool if you posted more soon. Whenever..." (NOW!)
~NICOLE
