Oh AnnieM, thanks for sharing the video. I knew that elevator scene describing her outfit was significant, but couldn't remember this Heat Wave scene. I kept thinking she wore a keyhole top in GGGofH, but it was a different color!! This info just makes this chapter more meaningful. And your thought processing behind the easter eggs adds even more depth to the story; while making another of my favorite lines from chapter 4 more noteworthy........
“Do you think there’s some alternate universe out there where your dad never had a heart attack, and you wound up working in Metropolis?” Her question was lighthearted, but her eyes were sad.
You absolutely nailed the essence of this act. I love how you allow us to live in Lois’s skin and really experience the palpable emotions captured and communicated visually in Heat Wave. And now, equally as well in
Written in the Stars. 
Thanks again for sharing your work!
