Another fantastic chapter! I like the pop-up video idea--in case I missed some episode references. I have picked up on some throughout the story. I really appreciate the effort it must take to weave those phrases into a completely new story. Particularly when they seem to work so impeccably! This is my favorite.
“All my life,” she whispered to herself, too quiet for him to hear.
I especially liked that she said this about Clark, and not Superman. Just perfect!
I am very anxious to see how the story unfolds.
