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Weeks of searching had taken their toll. Fast searches, desperately listening for her cries, anything he could use to pluck her from danger as he’d done so many times before. He’d crisscrossed his way across the Contiguous United States, venturing into Canada and Mexico when he couldn’t find her.

Oh my goodness! shock Who could have taken Lois? Why? Also, why was she asking forgiveness? There are so many questions which are unanswered here. If your muse allows, please continue someday. grovel

By the way, your descriptions were so powerful I was actually getting a little chilly!


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.