This is so sad and encouraging at the same time. At the very least you've created an interesting reason for the divorce. Most stories I read about Lois and Clark being divorced it was because he didn't spend enough time with his family. Now they are divorced because he cared too much. I can actually understand Lois' reasoning, the way she felt trapped with an overprotective Clark. And this time Martha and Jonathan weren't there to save the day. Such a pity.
But the problem doesn't seem to be that they fell out of love and that is promising. Clark still seems to be trying to woo her back, albeit carefully, and Lois already regrets her decision. I love this story. Can hardly wait for the next part.
Thank you so much for sharing
