My own unsolicited opinion.
Lynn, I am so grateful you “Came across this old vignette on your computer” and then decided to share it with us.
I don’t care if it was “too early in their relationship. I don’t care if it was in tune with the “dissect him like a frog ongoing theme.”
This was a DELIGHTFUL short , short story. Fun, giggling whimsical and such a joyous treasure to read. I always loved the balcony scene and this enhanced version of that scene was like pouring hot, gooey fudge sauce over MY FAVORITE ice cream “Moose Tracks.” Sorry Lois.
After the events at the Capitol last week, this tale was just what my soul needed. Just my humble opinion.
