Jenni, this is unfolding so wonderfully — your writing is terrific and conveys so much emotion. I loved the dialogue between Lois, Sara, Jonathan, Martha and Matt.
My heart also broke for Clark and these snatches of memory that taunt him so! I can't wait to see him make it back to Lois and the children, but I have to echo everyone else's sentiments here and also say that it shouldn't be rushed just because your readers are anxious.
Thanks for sharing this with us on the boards, Jenni. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
