Hello Terry,
Wow wow wow.
It promises to be one hell of a story!! You are a fabulous storyteller.
These two people in the Prologue jump off the page and are wonderfully alive (no pun intended).
The tension hooks the reader from the star, your style is crisp and gripping, and it’s so evocative that one really sees it as if on TV…
And this is perhaps why I won’t be able to continue to read this fic. It isn’t for the faint of heart.
I’m not sure I have the stomach for this sort of fic, because it’s—well, SO vivid. I’ll keep on reading the next chapter, though. However, as I’m a poor little thing, I fear your latest masterpiece isn’t for the likes of me.
All the best,
Mille
