folc4evernaday
I'm always willing to help look over a fellow writers fanfic.
Main things I look for:
Characterization - Is what is happening something that makes sense for the character given the timeline the fanfic is set in.
Plot Holes - Is there something missing or not enough information being given to the reader to understand what's going on in the story?
Flow of the Story - Is there any part of the fanfic that feels incomplete or abrupt?
Lack of Emotion - Is there a lack of emotion, setting, etc... in the story?
If interested you can PM me here or email me at folc4evernaday@gmail.com.
I work in MS Word and Google Docs pretty regularly.