Kathy and Annie,
Great part! I loved it!
Landing in a nearby alley to spin into his surveillance outfit, he was still tucking the tails of his black button-down shirt into the waistband of his black dress pants as he stepped onto the sidewalk.
Ooh, nice mental image!!
He still didn't know what kind of undercover assignment this was, but he definitely hoped they went on more of them in the future.
LOL!
I love how Lucy calls Lois the "birthday sister." That is really cute and funny!
Oh my gosh, drunk Lois seems like she is so much fun. I wish I was friends with her so I could go drinking with her. I bet she'd even want to sing about ducks with me.
Oh and Clark is such a nice guy. He doesn't even want to give in to Lois's advances.
but he decided it would be best to keep Lois as far away from her unfinished drink as possible.
LOL! Good idea, Clark
OMG I seriously woke my dad up at the "What do I win" part! Hmm, Annie, I wonder where this inspiration came from. Oh no, now my dad is yelling at me for waking him up. Too bad, I'm still laughing! <VBG>
Okay, still laughing about "Takeout Water"... it's been almost an hour since I read it! (still laughing as i am talking on IRC) Yep still laughing -- my dad had to go up to bed because I was annoying him.
Awwww! And Clark is just going to leave poor, drunk, willing Lois at home in bed??? What a boy scout!
"If you do remember this in the morning, Lois," he assured her breathlessly, "and you still want me ... I promise you, all you have to do is say the word, and I will be back here in a single heartbeat."
Awwwwwww!!!!! What a place to end! Clark is so sweet, I want him to come visit me if Lois decides she doesn't want him <g>.
I absolutely love this story and I can't wait until you guys post the next part!!!
- Alicia