Thanks for the feedback, Mouserocks.
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The tally of bad guys who have had their comeuppance in this exact way at the hands of Lois Lane is immeasurable.
Yes, totally. My guess is that Lois would say it's the bad guy's own fault that she is so good at catching them. They make bringing them down irresistible.
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Aww. Waffy even in the darkest of moments. So glad you included this bit of reflection; it helps underscore Lois' relationship with Clark. They always push each other to do better.
Lois gained so much from her connection to Clark over the years. He did, too, even if he didn't realize it.
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He had an imaginary friend named Lolo? AWWWWWWWWW the feels!
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Hi Ann! wave Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I love that Clark is finally beginning to understand their connection and his misplaced feelings for the wrong Lois. Now, there are enough parts left of the story for them to explore their relationship.
Yes, like KathyB said, we have some questions answered, a little exploration, and some a-plot coming right up.