Hi Tracey, thanks for your comments. Apologize for giving feedback? Please don't. I really appreciate hearing from more readers about what works and doesn't.

It's good to get another perspective on how I'm treating canon characters in the Alt world. Star and her aluminum foil helmet were part of the plot bunny from the beginning. Also, glad that Lois's relationship with Perry is coming through.
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Hey, anytime that Lois and Clark have to pretend to be married is a fabulous time in my book.
Me, too. It's a great way to short-circuit the too-long mating dance they did in the series.