Great job Mouse! A realistic view of issues Clark and Lois would deal with as they aged. As others have pointed out, I like the way you revealed the gradual changes over time. You've re-emphasized what the show also said, that he needs both Clark and Superman. Being Superman isn't enough. I like that you had him out himself when it would be very apparent he wasn't aging.
I laughed over the cheese of the month club excuse!
I especially liked this line:
What I am saying is that if I had to choose between the world maybe finding out Superman's secret identity or never getting my husband back, I wouldn't hesitate for a second."
Joan
