By the time I got to the end, I had forgotten that this was just part 1. I was expecting her to just lay down and not get up or for someone to sneak up on her and shoot her or something, then end abruptly on a wham. I'm relieved that there's more time to resolve the story.
It's kind of heartbreaking to see Lois slowly remember what happened, then finally remember that it's Clark who she shot. I like the way you have remixed the amnesia arc to have Lois (attempt to?) assassinate Superman.
There are several spots throughout the story where you have left out spaces in between words and in between sentences. You should do a quick read-through to fix those for readability.
