All I can say is where have you been all this time. These two stories are just amazing. The characterization is just so perfect. I always say that if I see Dean and Teri when I read the story then you have hit the characterization nicely and I see nothing but Dean and Teri when I read your two stories.
I just love the revelation part of the story. Definitely a Lois initial response but then that was colored by her love of the man as she sees how Clark/Superman has treated her even after she was so heartless to him/them. She sees the love the man has for her and it quickly outweighs the annoyance she immediately felt when she made the discovery.
Finally the ending has the proper amount of resolution and is open ended. The only thing I would have added would have been a stuttering Clark when she dropped the bombshell of the final sentence.
Please keep writing!
Mike
Last edited by Mike M; 02/19/17 12:03 PM.
