This was a really good story. I clearly heard your voice in Lois' pain and in her conflicted emotions. The introspection has authenticity, and I know it's because this story came from a real place in your heart. Thanks for sharing this piece of yourself with all of us. thumbsup


You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink