Hi Virginia! wave

Glad you liked the story of Mary Frances' father. I'm sure it made her more successful and a happier person. And it's probably at least part of how she saw through Clark's disguise.

I agree with you about the character Mike. I liked him, just thought the divine intervention contrived in the wedding episode. I'm beginning to think this could turn into a series with Mary Frances turning up in between scenes or between episodes. And working with Mike at least part of the time to make things right for Lois and Clark could prove an interesting twist.

Glad you found the two characters searching for Superman added to the story.

Mary Frances is fun to write.

Thanks for reading & commenting! hyper

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