Originally Posted by LMA
Awwww...I have been really looking forward to reading this story grin clap hyper !

What a great premise. I love this idea!

It is really refreshing to see Lois be the one to be very sure about them (not that Clark's not sure, though, just not the first to make the move) and put herself out on a limb. And Clark--wow...to worry about maybe being dumped (that be the 'problem') to a proposal! Then said 'problem' all of a sudden turns totally into Superman and how/when/what he should do about his other identity jump. Clark's head--it really must be spinning (in such a really awesome, but kinda crazy way)!

I am so excited to get into these next 7 parts. It's going to be great to see Clark try to figure this all out, and have us readers--meanwhile--know that Lois was the one to confidently broach the subject love.

I totally was expecting the proposal to come at the restaurant. But, IMO, completely loved it at the fountain grin.

Laura (who conveniently has another part to read--right now wave )

Glad you like the idea of it! Hopefully, you'll enjoy the way I run it off the road for a little bit too. (As if I would write anything straight forward!)

I liked letting Lois be the one to take charge and do what Clark so badly wants to do, but isn't quite confident enjoy to do yet. It's nice to see her more relationshipially mature. wink (Yes, I made up a word.)

I also enjoyed throwing Clark off balance with the proposal. It's part of the reason why he handles the call for Superman so poorly - he's thrown off balance and things are happening too fast for his poor brain to process. smile


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